this was reeeeaaally random even more so random then the animation/voice style you were trying to rip off of Egoraptor...
and that blood/vagina thing was really disgusting and that alone should have put it in the adult section instead of the mature section... it was gross and unnecessary...
i can see that u have talent so dont try and get views and stars stealing someone else' bit
try to make an animation in your own way and not in Ego's way im sure you could do great.
give yourself some dignity and make something thats worth your talent...